Wednesday, March 28, 2018

Swimming Sports

1 comment:

  1. Hi Room 2,

    I really enjoyed this report Josh and Jarreau :) I love your use of descriptive writing like drag racers and ploughing through the water. I really enjoyed the line 'our heavy bags and confident spirit' because it first weighs you down and then lifts you up. Great rhythm. It shows that non-fiction writing can be really creative. Do you do a lot of writing like this room 2? Cheers, Lee.


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